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Understand a strength. Locate a question. Try a next step.
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Example passage
At the station, I folded the letter twice. The train left. At home, I put the unopened letter in the kitchen drawer.
Your criteria at a glance.
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What is working.
The repeated letter gives the scene a clear focus. Leaving it unopened creates a question the reader can carry into the next scene.
Three useful next steps.
Make the turning point visible.
Between “The train left” and “At home”, add one action that suggests why the narrator keeps the letter unopened. Let the action carry the emotion.
Try a different pace.
Read the three short sentences aloud. Try expanding the sentence at the station while keeping the final sentence brief; compare the effect.
Build a connection.
In a later scene, return to the kitchen drawer. Consider what changes when the narrator approaches the letter again.
Your work. Your feedback.
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